I'm going to enter this short story in a contest. It's been expanded. Originally 3300 words, it's now nearly twice as long. I'd love some feedback.
Return
to Cinder
A
Short Story
By
Kristy Tate
Copyright,
2016
For
Angelique, the other woman in my future grandchild’s life.
Inspired
by actual events. A mechanical malfunction detours a woman’s quick road trip,
upsetting not only her weekend plans, but forever altering her future.
Angela left the wedding
earlier than she’d planned, but later than she should have. A cold winter sun
tipped near the horizon of the empty Nevada sky. Scrub oak and cacti littered
the sunbaked ground. An occasional tumbleweed dared to cross the two-lane
highway that cut through the desert. An audiobook helped her putter through the
hours. She’d chosen Les Miserables
more for its length than its storyline—she’d seen both the musical and the
movie— but somewhere between Coaldale and Tonopah, the narrator’s voice
sputtered and coughed before falling silent.
Angela glanced at her
dashboard. Strange. The lights and gauges seemed to work.
She tried the radio.
White noise filled her car. At first, the sound seemed as empty as rushing
wind, but after a few moments she heard sharp clips of a foreign language. She
spun the radio dial to the right, searching for another station, but only barks
of the strange language greeted her. Russian? No, that wasn’t it. German? That
didn’t sound right either.
Suddenly, the radio
fell silent. Her eyes darted up to the rearview mirror, seeing only murky dust
clouds behind her as they rolled off the spinning tires.
What if the car broke
down? The last town she’d driven through was nothing more than a gas station, a
café, and a general store. The only car she’d spotted had been a patrol car
parked at the lone intersection with a mannequin behind the wheel, probably as
a deterrent to speeders trying to run away from such a dead-end sort of place.
Vegas was the next
major city. With one hand on the wheel and the other in her purse, she rummaged
for her phone. It, like the radio, was dead. Knowing it should have been fully
charged, she tried turning it on. The screen remained dark. She plugged it into
her car charger and began to hum a few lines from the song Castle on a Cloud.
Miles flew by and
boredom settled across her shoulders. She tried the radio a few more times, but
even the white noise with the muted foreign conversation remained silent. A
glance at her phone told her that it was still dead. The charger hadn’t helped
at all. Apprehension tickled her imagination. What if there was something wrong
with the car’s electrical system?
She pulled off the
road, unsure of what to do next. Climbing from the car, she rolled her
shoulders and tried to ease the nervous tension pinging up and down her spine.
She knew she was on Highway 95—she hadn’t veered off the freeway except for at
that quick stop in…what was the name of that town? She leaned against the hood
and worried at a hangnail on her pointy finger. A breeze lifted her skirt and
her spirits.
You’re
not lost, she told herself. You just need to turn around and get back on the right road. You’ll be
in Vegas by sundown and you’ve driven to Vegas from Gilbert so many times you
could do it in your sleep. If she had to, she could spend the night in
Vegas with her cousin Gabby. She leaned into the car and glanced at the dark
dashboard. She had no idea how much gas she had. She didn’t know what time it
was. She obviously wasn’t heading in the right direction.
She gave herself a
small shake and a quick silent lecture on letting her imagination run wild.
How far was she from
Area 51? Wasn’t it strange that the US had military ammunition depots
surrounding the infamous outpost closest to the nation’s largest Magnesium
mines? Magnesium, aliens, military outposts…she was drawing random conclusions
out of clues that had no reference to each other. She was bored, tired, and
longing for home.
Jody’s wedding had been
a hurried, thrown together, last minute affair. The way you do anything is the way you do everything… Jody lived
her entire life flying by the seat of her pants and expecting everyone who
loved her to come dancing when she sang. But Angela loved her cousin, and so
she’d made the twelve and a half hour drive for the ten minute ceremony in a
Reno casino chapel. She’d even worn the red dress Jody had picked out for her.
But at this moment,
sweat was pooling between her breasts and the red chiffon was clinging to her
legs—and not in a good way. Angela bent at the waist and let her hands dangle
toward her toes. She righted herself in time to see a black and white patrol
car aiming for her.
The police car drew
along beside her and rolled down his window. A grandfatherly sort of man
bearing a strong resemblance to the picture on the package of her favorite
oatmeal smiled at her. Sunlight glistened off the sheriff badge on his chest.
“Howdy, ma’am. Looks like you got yourself some problems.”
“I’m not sure…I mean
the car runs fine now, but everything on the dashboard is dark.”
The sheriff rolled his
car in front of hers, climbed out, and hitched up his belt as he ambled toward
her. “Sounds like an electrical problem.”
Angela lifted a
shoulder. “I thought so, too.”
The sheriff studied the
fading sun. “Best bring it in and let Lester take a look at it. That’s our
local mechanic. You could try for Vegas, but it’s a good two hundred miles
away. If you ended up stranded on the road…well, let’s just say it’d be a fair
piece to walk in those fancy shoes.”
Angela glanced down at
her red sparkly high heels. “I have more practical shoes in my bag.” Still, the
thought of wandering in the desert for miles scared her.
“Why don’t you follow
me into town? I’ll call Lester and let him know you’re coming.”
Angela agreed, got back
into her car, and tried to start the ignition. It clicked, but the engine
didn’t turn over. Her shoulders sagged in defeat.
The sheriff climbed
from his car and headed her way. He took off his wide-brimmed hat and scratched
his bald head. “Looks like this car ain’t going anywhere on its own. I put in a
call to Lester to bring his tow truck.”
Angela’s thoughts
sputtered to her list of things she needed to get done this weekend. The
briefcase beside her contained dozens of legal documents she needed to review
to make sure all the I’s were dotted and the T’s were crossed. She couldn’t
trust her assistant, Carol, because she was new. Irritation flashed through Angela.
She didn’t really understand why she seemed to blow through assistants the way
policemen munched through donuts.
“You okay here on your
own?” The sheriff’s eyes twinkled with concern mixed with pity. “Lester should
be here in a shake of a pig’s tail.”
“I’m fine.” Angela
glanced at her briefcase. She carried her work with her everywhere. She
believed in using her islands of time wisely. It’s what made her successful.
After the sheriff left, Angela tried to roll up her window, but of course it
wouldn’t budge. The electrical panel, she reminded herself. A warm wind blew
through the car. She didn’t remember rolling down the other windows, but she
must have. It was nice now, but she knew it would get cold as soon as the sun
set. She wondered how far Lester had to come and exactly how long did it take for
a pig to shake its tail?
Angela clicked open her
briefcase just as a puff of breeze blew through the car. Her papers lifted into
the air and sailed out the window.
She scrambled after
them, knocking her briefcase to the floor. She jumped out of the passenger
door. She stared at her life’s work dancing in the sky. She didn’t know which
one to chase; they all seemed to be flying in different directions. She leaped
for one, then another, but they floated just beyond her reach as if a cruel
puppeteer had attached them to strings and was intentionally yanking them
skyward.
Angela huffed and
placed her hands on her hips. She could draw up more documents…
Just then a truck pulled
into view. Angela shielded her eyes to better watch Lester’s tow truck rumbling
her way. He pulled in front of her car, backed up, and dropped the large hook
before climbing from the truck. Lester reminded her of someone, but she
couldn’t say who. He pushed back his cap and grinned at her. “Got yourself
stuck?”
She nodded.
“Well, I’m happy to
take a look at it for you, but we better get a move on before that storm blows
in.”
Angela glanced at the
purple clouds gathering on the distant hills.
“Looks like a nasty
one, too,” Lester said.
She gathered her
overnight bag and now nearly empty briefcase from her car. She looked around
for her papers, but there wasn’t a single one in sight. Where was her phone?
After a few moments of frantically searching, she abandoned it and tottered on
her high heels to the passenger side of Lester’s truck and climbed in.
Moments later after the
Lexus was securely hoisted mid-air, Lester joined her. With the windows rolled
down they pulled away. Something crunched beneath the tires.
Angela yelped as if she’d
been bitten by a dog and scrambled out of the truck without waiting for Lester
to stop. She hit the ground hard and ran to her car. Her smashed phone was now
a glittery pile of glass and plastic shards.
“Everything alright?”
Lester asked when she climbed back in the car.
She could only stare at
him.
He asked her where she
was headed and where she’d come from. She told him about the wedding.
“Got someone waiting at
home for you?”
“My husband is on a
hunting trip with his brother’s family.” Mark had begged her to join him, but
when Jody’s wedding came up, she was glad she had an excuse not to go. She
loved Mark ’s family, but a whole week of hanging out in the woods was not on
her to-do list. Not that any of that was Lester’s business.
Lester’s eyes crinkled
with kindness and he tried to soften the blow of his next words. “I’m just not
sure how much I’ll be able to do, it being the weekend and all. Tomorrow’s the
Sabbath…”
“You’re Mormon?” she
asked.
“How’d you know?”
“It takes one to know
one, I guess.” She realized who he reminded her of, her Uncle Jib. A large man
with a big laugh and an even bigger heart.
“I hate to tell you there
ain’t no hotel in Cinder.”
“Cinder?”
He nodded. “Closest
town for a hundred miles. You might not feel like it right now, but you’re
actually lucky your car chose to break down where it did.”
“Lucky…” He was right.
That was definitely not how she was feeling.
“There’s a ward party
planned for tonight. Brother and Sister Jenkins got their mission call and all
their kids are in town to send them off big time.”
She heard the longing
in his voice. “That sounds lovely…I hate to make you miss it.”
“Whelp. Let’s see what
we can do to get you back on the road.”
Lester began to fill
her in on the Jenkins, their kids, and all the other townsfolk who would be at
the party. When Angela didn’t respond with more than a murmur or an occasional
nod, Lester abandoned the conversation.
A comfortable silence
filled the cab, and Angela found herself wondering about the papers that had
flown away. After a few miles, raindrops began pelting the windshield. She
imagined them soaking her documents and turning them to mush. She sucked in a
deep breath, realizing that if not for the sheriff, she would have been stuck
in the storm a hundred miles from anyone and anything.
Lightning flashed as
they drove into town. Welcome to Cinder, the sign read, population 368. They
passed a Mormon church, a general store, a diner called Suzy’s and a gas
station/mechanic’s shop. Lester pulled the truck alongside the shop.
“Ain’t much, but it’s
home.”
Home.
She thought longingly of her home with Mark. It would be empty. Silent. The
cool beige and creamy décor a welcome relief from her hectic career. She
belonged there. She didn’t belong in this tiny town.
A warm light poured
through the windows of the chapel across the street. People hunkering beneath
umbrellas and raincoats dashed across the parking lot and through the open
door.
Lester nodded at the
church. “If you’re hungry, that place right there is your best bet. Suzy
already closed her diner.”
“I can’t just crash
their party!”
“Why not? They’ll be
happy to have you.” He threw the car into park. “Don’t tell them you’re a
member. Let ‘em think they’re doing missionary work. They’ll be filling you up
with green Jello salad before you can say howdy.”
Angela swallowed.
“Maybe I can just hang out at the library…” When she realized that she hadn’t
seen a library, she added, “or in your waiting room.”
“Nah. Ain’t got a
waiting room. All my customers either wait for repairs at Sister Suzy’s, but
seeing how she’s closed…”
Angela took the hint.
She gathered up her bag and purse, thanked Lester, and tried to dodge raindrops
as she splashed across the street to the chapel.
Conversations hushed as
she pushed through the door. A man with a large silver belt buckle greeted her
with an outstretched hand.
“I’m Angela,” she said,
aware that everyone in the foyer had stopped to listen. She explained her car
problems.
“Well Angela,” the big
man said. “I’m Bishop Baxter.” He held out his hand and motioned at a woman
across the room. She trotted to his side. “And this here is Sister Baxter. If
Lester can’t fix your jalopy anytime soon, we’d love to have you stay with us.”
“Oh no, I can’t do
that,” Angela said even as a quiet dread filled her, letting her know that this
was exactly what was going to happen.
And it did.
#
The Baxters lived in a
small brick bungalow a block past Main Street. Sister Baxter led her down the
hall to the last door on the left.
“This is my craft room,”
she said. The room was dominated by a queen-sized bed adorned with a
hand-pieced quilt and a large collection of embroidered pillows. The walls were
lined with shelves filled with dolls, candles, wood plaques with scriptures
painted on them, balls of yarn, rolls of fabric, and a large collection of
sewing notions. A sewing machine sat on a desk beside a window and a peg board
with dozens of spools of thread hung beside it.
“Bishop calls it my
crap room,” she added in a hushed voice. “But don’t tell anyone he uses that
sort of language.” She chuckled and winked. “He does like to let his hair down
when he’s at home. Not that he has much hair to speak of.” She paused and
fumbled with her apron. “You’ll be alright in here? I know it’s not much…”
“No, this is great.
Thank you.” Angela dropped her bag on the bed and glanced around. “Do you have
a phone I could borrow? I’d like to let someone know where I am.”
“Sure thing, sweetie. The
cell service is spotty way out here, but we got a land line. I’ll get it for
you.”
She disappeared and Angela
took a seat in the chair in front of the sewing machine. Her mom had a Singer
machine just like this one. It had to be forty years old.
Sister Baxter returned
and handed Angela the phone. “Well, I’ll give you some privacy so you can call
your husband. Church tomorrow morning is at ten and there’s a linger longer
afterwards and rumor has it Maureen will be bringing her famous brown-paper bag
apple pie, so you won’t want to miss.”
“Huh, thank you again.”
The phone felt heavy in Angela’s hand. She couldn’t call Mark—he was hunting in
the High Uinta’s and prided himself on being off the grid. All of her other
contacts were in her phone. She was embarrassed to admit that she didn’t even
know her daughter’s telephone numbers. The only number she knew was her mom’s
land line.
Her thoughts skittered
back to her last conversation with Mom. They’d argued over Erma, Mom’s latest house
guest who had suddenly left and “accidentally” took Mom’s laptop and cell phone
with her. Mom had a habit of rescuing lame ducks, bringing them into her home,
and lending them money that, of course, was never repaid.
“Why does Mom have to
throw her money away on strangers and weirdos?” she’d asked Mark. “If she has
so much money, why can’t she help pay for the girls’ tuition?”
“Darlin,” Mark had
drawled, “we don’t need your mom’s charity and there’s plenty of people who do.”
Mark, of course, had
been right. But still…Angela wasn’t ready to call her mom. She didn’t know who
to call. She went to bed feeling disgruntled and misplaced.
She had just started to
drift off when she heard the unmistakable sound of lovemaking coming from the
next room. How old were these people? They looked like geriatrics but they
sounded like teenagers.
Right before he’d left
for his hunting trip, Mark had wanted to fool around. He’d made a comment about
how he’d brushed teeth—which was about as romantic as he ever got. And she’d
brushed him off. What had been her excuse? She couldn’t remember. Had she a
contract to look over? Something that couldn’t wait? Angela fluffed a mildew-smelling
pillow and placed it over her head. Then, she silently started to cry.
The next morning, the sermons
focused on charity. In her bright red dress and sparkly shoes, Angela felt
overdressed compared to the rest of the congregation. Everyone seemed to be
about her mom’s age—seventy going on eighty. The women all wore polyester
dresses, saggy pantyhose and flat-heeled shoes. The men wore dark suits, white
shirts, bolo ties, and belts with ornate belt buckles. After what she’d heard
the night before, she couldn’t bear to look at Sister and Bishop Baxter, but
they were hard to avoid since the both sat on the stand—he directly behind the
podium and she seated at the organ.
The speaker droned on.
Typically, Angela scrolled through her phone during Sunday services, but since
that couldn’t happen, she found herself following along. “Though I speak with
the tongues of men and of angels, and have not charity, I am become as sounding
brass, or a tinkling cymbal. And though I have the gift of prophecy, and
understand all mysteries, and all knowledge; and though I have all faith, so
that I could remove mountains, and have not charity, I am nothing. And though I
bestow all my goods to feed the poor, and though I give my body to be burned,
and have not charity, it profiteth me nothing.”
The words rankled. It
wasn’t that she faulted her mom for taking in every Sad Sally and Moronic Mac,
but…well, maybe she did.
“Charity suffereth
long, and is kind; charity envieth not; charity vaunteth not itself, is not
puffed up, Doth not behave itself unseemly, seeketh not her own, is not easily
provoked, thinketh no evil; Rejoiceth not in iniquity, but rejoiceth in the
truth; 7Beareth all things, believeth all things, hopeth all things, endureth
all things. Charity never faileth.”
The closing song was
Because I Have Been Given Much.
Because
I have been given much,
I
too must give;
Because
of thy great bounty Lord,
Each
day I live;
I
shall divide my gifts from thee
With
every brother that I see
Who
has the need of help from me.*
Angela could hardly
choke out the words. Once she promised herself that she’d call her mom
immediately after church, she felt better.
But she’d forgotten
about the linger longer. And the brown paper-bag apple pie really was amazing.
“Aren’t you a sweetie,”
Sister Clemson said when Angel complimented her. “I’d be happy to show you how
to make it.”
“If you could text me
the recipe, I’d really appreciate it.”
“I don’t text, dear.”
Of
course you don’t, Angela thought. The whole town was
trapped in a Mayberry RFD time warp.
“And it’s not the sort
of recipe you can just read. You need to see
how it’s done. Maybe you could come by tomorrow, and I can show you.”
“Oh, but I’ll be gone
by tomorrow.”
Sister Clemson answered
with a knowing a smile. “Well, we’ll see.”
As soon as she returned
to the Baxters, she asked to use the phone. With the scripture from 1st
Corinthians playing tag with the lyrics of Because I Have Been Given Much in
her head, she needed to talk to her mom with growing urgency.
Because
I have been sheltered, fed
By
thy good care;
I
cannot see another’s lack and I not share;
My
glowing fire, my loaf of bread,
my
roof's safe shelter overhead
That
he too may be comforted,
She locked herself in
the crap room and dialed her mom’s number.
“Oh sweetie, I’m so glad
you called,” Mom said. “I just hate it when we bicker.”
“Me too, Mom,” Angela
choked out the words. “I’m sorry.” She cleared her throat. “And I’m sorry about
Erma. Have you heard from her?”
“No, and I don’t think
I will.” She gave a sad little sigh. “I think she’s gone for good this time.”
Angela thought about
asking about the laptop or cell phone, but decided not to.
“Tell me about the
girls! I bet the boys are sniffing around their dorm rooms!”
It bothered Angela that
her mom always wanted to know about her daughters’ love lives, but seemed to
have little interest in their studies or internships, but whatever…She filled
her mom in on her daughters’ latest flings and escapades.
“What’s that, Polly?” Mom
said.
Angela realized Mom was
talking to someone else. Laughter peeled through the phone.
“I have to go, sweetie,”
Mom said. “Listen, we might not be able to talk again for a while, but I want
you to know how much I love you.” She added in a voice thick with tears. “Goodbye,
darling. Give everyone my love.”
“Mom?”
“I have to go. Polly,
wait just a sec, oh, bother, right…Goodbye, my angel!” The line went dead.
Angela stared at the
phone. She thought about calling Mom back to ask what she meant that they wouldn’t
be talking again for a while. Was Mom planning a trip? Where would she go?
A soft rapping on the
door interrupted her thoughts.
“Come in,” Angela
called.
“The quilting guild
meets in the basement, you’re welcome to join us.”
“Oh, okay, thanks.”
Angela bit her lip, debating. She tried calling Mom again, but no one answered.
She wanted to call her sister, but didn’t know her cell number off the top of
her head. Frustrated, she decided not to worry about her mom and went to join
the women of the quilting guild gathered in the basement.
At first, she’d been
horrified when Lester told her that it would be several days before the part he
needed would arrive. She couldn’t imagine how she’d pass the time, but Sister
Baxter and other members of the ward had happily filled her days. She’d helped
Sister Clark plant her tomatoes. She’d joined the quilting guild as they made
blankets for refugees, and then Sister Nelson needed help cleaning out her
basement.
Three days later, Angela
left Cinder with a working car and a happy heart. It seemed the whole town
gathered to say goodbye when Lester finally declared her car safe for travel.
“Take care,” Sister
Baxter said, wrapping her in warm, tight hug.
“Be safe,” Sister Clark
said, taking both of Angela’s hands in hers. “Now, I got your address alright
so I can be sure to send you some of my tomato jelly?”
Angela nodded and
blinked back tears.
“God speed, girlie,”
Lester said, tipping back his hat and giving her a grin.
Angela climbed in her
car, started up the engine, and waved goodbye. She didn’t care that her
briefcase was empty because her heart was full.
After quickly finding
her way back onto the road, she arrived home five hours later. The audiobook
version of Les Miserables kept her
company. After unpacking her things and taking a shower, she pulled out the
thank you notes she used to send her clients. She frowned at the heavy cream
and gold embossed stationary. They were expensive, lovely, but somehow not
right…professional…cold. She needed something that could convey her gratitude
for the reminder that life could be simpler, joyful, and full of meaning and
service.
On a whim, she pulled
out her paints. Of course, she hadn’t painted a thing in several years. Not
since her girls were little. She expected to find the watercolors dried and
hard, but with a little bit of water, they worked just fine.
She made cards for the
Baxters, Sister Clark, Lester, and a collective one for all the ladies of the
quilting guild.
After that, she pulled
out her easel, a canvas, and her oil paints. She had just slipped on her old smock
when she got the call.
“Where have you been?” her
sister Dorrie demanded.
She told her about her
time in Cinder.
“Well, Mom died.”
“What? When?”
“Sunday.”
Sunday? “I talked to
her on Sunday. She seemed fine. What happened?”
“A heart attack.”
Grief blindsided her,
but after a few gut-wrenching moments, wonder surpassed the pain when she
remembered that her mom had a sister named that Polly had died more than sixty
years ago, before Angela had been born.
“When’s the funeral?”
“We decided to hold a
memorial after the school year when Frank can come.”
That made sense.
“Do you want me to come
and help go through her things?”
“Not necessary,” Dorrie
said. “I know how busy you are.”
“Right.” Busy. She thought about pressing the
matter, but decided against it. Knowing Dorrie, she’d distribute all of Mom’s
possessions among her own children before Angela would have time to look over
any of it.
She chided herself for
her unkind thoughts and Mark’s words floated in her mind, We don’t need your mom’s charity, and there’s plenty of people who do.
Life resumed. Work went
on. Mark came home and she greeted at the door in a negligee. It was all the
same, but different. Angela began leaving her work at her office and filled her
islands of time in new ways. She taught herself to make tomato jelly. She
bought some fabric and joined a local quilting guild. She created a permanent
place for her easel in the den and
started painting again.
One evening, Mark interrupted
her painting session. “What are all these cards?” he asked as he shuffled
through the mail.
Angela pushed the hair
away from her face with the back of her hand, put down her paintbrush, and
reached for the cards. The words, RETURN TO SENDER, ADDRESS UNKNOWN was stamped
across each of them.
“These are the cards I
made for the people I met in Cinder,” she said, turning them over, searching
for a clue as to why they’d been returned. “I must have gotten the zip-code
wrong.”
She pulled away from
the easel and padded into her office. After wiping her hands on the hem of her
paint smock, she settled in front of her computer, turned it on, and typed
Cinder, Nevada into the search bar.
No results.
“This can’t be right,”
she murmured.
Mark peered over her
shoulder. “What?”
“There’s no Cinder,
Nevada.”
“Could you have been in
California?”
“No…I’m sure.”
“Try it anyway.”
Nothing.
“Maybe you’re spelling
it wrong.”
“No…I saw the sign.”
“Ah…a sign.” Mark joked.
“It’s not funny.” Angela’s
fingers flew over the keyboard as she searched for…wait. The only person she
knew by their first name had been Lester—everyone else had been simply brother
or sister. But Lester…she had paid him with a credit card. She pulled up her
bank card statement. But the three days she’d been in Cinder were surprisingly
free of transactions.
“He fixed your car, but
didn’t charge you?” Mark asked. “Can’t be much of a businessman.”
“Maybe just not yet…”
She dropped her forehead to the desk. “Am I crazy?”
Mark put his hand on
her shoulder. “You are one of the sanest people I know.”
“Thank you.” She straightened
her shoulders. “I’m not so sure…”
“What else could have
happened?”
“I blacked out, had
some sort of episode—”
“Met a town full of
aliens…” Mark quipped.
“Whatever.” Angela
tried to laugh but fell silent. “I’m still glad it happened.”
“Then I am, too,” Mark said
as he pulled her into his arms and hugged her. She settled against him with a
sigh.
Three days later a
package without a return address arrived. The postmark read Cinder, Nevada. Angela
set the package on her kitchen counter, almost afraid to touch it.
Mark handed her a pair
of scissors. “Open it.”
“You do it.”
“Nope. It was your
alien encounter.”
Her hands trembled as
she cut through the brown postal paper and cardboard box. There, wrapped in a
swath of calico fabric, lay a mason jar of jelly beside a handwritten card.
Dear
Angela,
Thank
you for your lovely visit. We all so enjoyed getting to know you a bit better,
and pray that you know how much we love you. Take care, Sister Baxter
P.S.
You should sell your paintings at the Gilbert Art Walk.
“Huh,” Mark said as he
peeked over her shoulder. “Did you talk about painting while you were there?”
Angela fumbled through
her memories of her time in Cinder—the place that seemed to exist only in her
mind. She didn’t remember talking much, but rather she had let the
conversations wash over her. She’d been surrounded by the laughter, the
gossip—a part of it, but not a contributor.
In fact, she realized,
that was an apt description of her life. Until Cinder.
“No. I don’t think I
did. I’m not sure I said anything at all.” She puzzled over her time in Cinder
for days, months, and years, but eventually, when she thought about it, she
always smiled. And although the events of those three days blurred into one
smear of a happy memory, a line from Victor Hugo’s Les Miserables rang clear, “There
is nothing like a dream to create future.”
*
Music by Phillip Landgrave (1975)
Lyrics
by Grace Noll Crowell (1936)
Love the premise, Kristy! I noticed a few typos, so a little editing would go a long way to polish it up.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the submission. Stella
AH!! Loved it! The disappearing town and people were perfect to make memories. The sermon on charity is just what this world needs right now. Thank you for letting us read this very sweet story.
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ReplyDeleteGreat short story! I agree with oclibrarianesque. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck!!
ReplyDeleteLoved it. It had that slight creepy, paranormal feel. But not the sort of thing that would cause nightmares.
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