Wednesday, June 21, 2023

Wednesday's Word: An Excerpt From Whisper's Over Wildrose Road

  Welcome to Wednesdays where I share a snippet from one of my stories using the previous day's word from the New York Times' game. WORDLE. Yesterday's WORDLE was FROST.



From Chapter 15

Madeline watched the drone video again, her confusion mounting. The cast-off furniture on the warehouse’s main floor made sense—given the antique store had owned the building—but the bedroom on the second floor did not. Unless someone had been living there?

But, despite the bed, linens, and pillows, the space didn’t look lived in. No clothes. No telltale signs of habitation, like toiletries, or plates or cups. But there wouldn’t be, if whoever had been living there had left, right?

She was tempted to see it for herself, but it was dark. Night had fallen hours ago. Besides, when she thought about that ladder, she wasn’t any braver now than she’d been before. She needed someone who wasn’t terrified of heights to inspect the second story. But who?

Lizzy?

She had just as much of a stake in the warehouse as Madeline, and she was not only camping out in that cabin but also, according to Nicole, taking pictures of her renovation progress and posting them on social media.

Madeline herself never went on social media. She couldn’t understand the fascination. She wasn’t interested in what other people had for lunch, how they spent their weekends, or how many hours they logged at the gym.

Happy with her decision to reach out to Lizzy, Madeline powered down her computer, retrieved her toothbrush, and got ready for bed. Her things were still in her suitcase, and she promised herself she’d unpack tomorrow.

She rarely traveled without her children, so the enormous bed with the window overlooking the lights sparkling on the lake below felt lonely and strange. She found the silence eerie. At home, there was always the buzz of traffic from the distant parkway, no matter the hour. A neighbor’s barking dog. Someone’s music or TV. Here, nothing but the wind rustling the trees and the spattering of raindrops against the windows.

Madeline slipped between the icy sheets and wiggled her legs and toes in an effort to warm things up. Shortly, she began to relax, her thoughts slowed, and eventually, she slept.

Wailing shattered her dream. She’d been in the warehouse, and someone had been screaming. It was that Paul Bunyan of a man and his dog. The man stood beneath the ladder, the creature beside him, and…wait… Madeline’s subconscious receded, and logic kicked in.

Sitting up, Madeline blinked in the darkness. The wailing. What was it? She fumbled for the lamp, and after she knocked it off the nightstand, she reached for her phone instead. The glowing numbers read 2:00 a.m.

Where was that sound coming from?

She followed it to an alarm with a furiously blinking light hanging on the ceiling in the hall.

What the heck? Why would it go off now?

She lifted her nose in the air but couldn’t smell any smoke. Maybe it wasn’t a smoke alarm but a carbon monoxide detector.

What could set off a CO detector? Her mind raced. Malfunctioning fuel-burning appliances? The options seemed endless: furnaces, gas range/stoves, gas clothes dryers, water heaters, portable fuel-burning space heaters, fireplaces, generators and wood-burning stoves…

Whatever it was, Madeline would never be able to sleep while it wailed. Besides, what if the place was filling up with carbon monoxide at this very minute? She didn’t want to wake up in heaven. She wasn’t ready to follow Brian.

But where would she go? Should she call the property manager at this hour? No. They probably wouldn’t answer. Could she sleep in the car? Return to the resort? Not after her last encounter with the pissy manager. They had tried to give her a room that reeked of smoke, even though she’d insisted on a nonsmoking room.

All of our rooms are nonsmoking, the manager had said.

Then why does this one smell like a Cuban cigar? she’d shot back.

An argument had ensued. Finally, Madeline had been given a suite, but she’d also had to pay nearly double. If she went back, they’d probably try to give her a linen closet and charge a small fortune.

The warehouse had a bed…but she couldn’t climb that ladder. Could she? Madeline blew out a breath and gathered up her purse, not knowing where she would go but knowing one thing for certain. She couldn’t stay here.

Outside, the rain hit her like tiny shards of ice. Her hands shook as she started the car and waited for the heater to warm. Beneath her hands, the steering wheel felt like FROST. Music blasted, and she ended it with a push of a button. Now, sleep seemed like a distant, happy, but impossible-to-recapture memory.

Madeline sped over the silent and empty streets. The moon—a smear of light flickering through gray clouds—hung above the trees. She followed the GPS to the warehouse but slowed when she rolled off the Rim of the World Highway and bounced onto the dirt road. A cluster of vehicles were parked beside the warehouse. Lights flickered through the upstairs windows.

Trespassers. What should she do? Call the police?

The memory of her find at her parents’ house flashed in her mind. Her parents couldn’t have anything to do with this, could they?

Unsure where to go or what to do, Madeline switched off her lights and drummed her fingers on the steering wheel, waiting for something more—although she couldn’t guess what—to happen. Should she call the police, or would that just prolong an already long and sleepless night? After a few minutes, cold reality settled. She didn’t want to stay here or talk to the police, she couldn’t go back to her rental, and she wasn’t about to go back to the resort.

Lizzy.

As much as she hated to admit it, tonight, Lizzy seemed to be the answer to all of Madeline’s problems. Where was Lizzy’s cabin? That man—Allen-something—had given her a card. Could that have an address? He’d said he lived next door to Lizzy’s cabin. Madeline scrounged through her purse and located the card.

Ashton Arthur

Documentary Producer

Annandale Court

Really? Lizzy’s cabin was on a street with the same name as the antique store? Was that a coincidence?

Grandma Norma hadn’t believed in coincidences, but Madeline did. Still, she was too cold and tired to wiggle the meaning out of this latest puzzle.  She typed the address into her GPS.

A few dark and cold minutes later, she pulled up in front of Ashton’s house on Annandale Court—a cheery blue and white cape cod that even in the dim of her headlights wore a much-loved and well-cared-for look. There was only one house beside it.

Lizzy had said her grandfather’s cabin had fallen into disrepair. Madeline put her car in gear and angled her headlights so they shone to the left of Ashton’s address. She spotted a set of stairs with an accompanying rickety handrail.

That had to be Lizzy’s cabin. Madeline glanced around for Lizzy’s ancient Honda and, not finding it, let out a sigh of relief. How would she get in? Try the slider off the back balcony? Break a window?

Madeline put her car in park, drew the hood of her jacket over her head, and dashed through the rain. She took the stairs down the slope two at a time and stopped to shiver beneath the porch roof. She tried the door. Locked. She darted around to the back porch, thumped up the steps, and noticed the bathroom window was ajar. It screeched when she pushed it open, but moments later, she was halfway through.

 


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